Two adjectives is normal, and three is plenty
Long chains of adjectives belong in grammar books, not in good writing. In real English, most nouns take one or two adjectives, three is unusual, and native speakers rarely go past that. If you have more to say, move the extra detail after the noun with with, from or made of, or give it a sentence of its own. You will sound more natural, and you will have fewer words to put in order.
- Right:I bought a small blue lamp from Japan.
- Right:We stayed in a quiet old hotel with a view of the river.
- Right:Her desk is made of dark oak.
- Not:We have a big nice old round brown oak table.Instead:We have a nice big round table made of dark oak.
Purpose words stay next to the noun
A purpose word tells you what something is for: running shoes, a study room, a sleeping bag. It works with the noun like a single word, so nothing goes between them. Every other adjective goes in front of the pair: new running shoes, a quiet study room. The same is true of a noun that names the kind of thing, such as campus in a small modern campus library or history in a difficult history exam.
- Right:She packed a warm sleeping bag.
- Right:A small modern campus library opened last year.
- Right:We have a difficult history exam on Friday.
- Not:He bought a tennis new racket.Instead:He bought a new tennis racket.
- Not:I took a chemistry hard class.Instead:I took a hard chemistry class.
Same type of adjective? Use a comma or and
Two adjectives of the same type have no set order, so you join them with a comma or with and: a cold, wet day or a cold and wet day. To test a pair, put and between the words, then swap them. If both still sound fine, they are the same type, as in a smart, funny professor. If not, as in a big red car, use no comma and no and. A comma never goes right before the noun.
- Right:It was a hot, humid afternoon.
- Right:He is a calm, careful driver.
- Right:My advisor is a kind and helpful person.
- Not:We had a long, busy, week.Instead:We had a long, busy week.
- Not:It was a quiet, and sunny morning.Instead:It was a quiet, sunny morning.
- Not:I carried a small, black bag.Instead:I carried a small black bag.
After a verb, and with two colors, use and
The order only matters before a noun. After a verb such as is, seems or looks, adjectives need and, and you can usually choose the order: the room is small and bright. With three, use commas and then and: the room is small, bright and quiet. Two colors on one thing also need and: a black and white photo. Without it, the two colors have no link and the phrase is wrong.
- Right:The new gym is clean and bright.
- Right:The lecture was long, dry and hard to follow.
- Right:Our team wears a green and white jersey.
- Not:The dorm is quiet clean.Instead:The dorm is quiet and clean.
- Not:She sent me a black white photo.Instead:She sent me a black and white photo.
Articles and numbers come before every adjective
Small words such as a, the, my and this come first, then numbers, then adjectives: my two old friends, the three new students. First, next and last go in front of a number: the first two chapters. One more check: when you reorder adjectives, the article can change, because the word straight after it decides between a and an. It is a new film, but an interesting new film.
- Right:My two best friends live on campus.
- Right:We read the last three pages again.
- Right:It is an exciting new project.
- Not:I met new three students.Instead:I met three new students.
- Not:She is a excellent young writer.Instead:She is an excellent young writer.
Where this costs you marks on the TOEFL
The TOEFL has no separate grammar section, so adjective order costs you marks inside Writing and Speaking. The sharpest test is Build a Sentence, the 10 short Writing items where you put words in order: if two adjectives change places, the sentence is wrong. In Write an Email and the Academic Discussion you choose your own words, so use two adjectives you can place with confidence rather than three you are guessing at. One slip is small, but phrases such as a leather black bag hurt when they keep appearing. In Listen and Repeat, a sentence is also easier to say back when its order already sounds normal to you.