TOEFL Writing sample responses

Rubric-anchored sample responses for every TOEFL iBT 2026 Writing task. See a band 3 response and a band 5 response side by side, with detailed analysis of what specifically holds each one back or pushes it higher.

Write an Email Band 5

TOEFL Email Task — Band 5

You receive the following email from your professor.

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Write an Email Band 3

TOEFL Email Task — Band 3

Same prompt as the band 5 sample. The student receives an email from Professor Tan announcing a grading-scheme change fo...

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Write an Email Band 5

TOEFL Email Task — Band 5 (Lab Schedule)

A second Email walkthrough on a different prompt — a lab teaching assistant has shifted the weekly section to a new time and asked students to confirm or propose alternatives.

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Write for an Academic Discussion Band 5

TOEFL Academic Discussion — Band 5

Your professor has posted the following discussion question, with two student replies already visible.

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Write for an Academic Discussion Band 3

TOEFL Academic Discussion — Band 3

Same prompt as the band 5 sample. Professor Lee asks for a position on sin taxes for unhealthy foods, with replies from ...

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Write for an Academic Discussion Band 5

TOEFL Academic Discussion — Band 5 (AI in Writing Classes)

A second Academic Discussion walkthrough on a different prompt — a rhetoric professor asks whether AI writing tools should be permitted in first-year writing courses.

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Build a Sentence Walkthrough

TOEFL Build-a-Sentence — Worked Examples & Strategy

Build a Sentence presents you with a series of word chunks (sometimes 4-5 chunks per item) inside a chat-style avatar di...

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Write an Email Band 4

TOEFL Email Task — Band 4 (Group Project)

Mid-tier sample on a group-project rescheduling prompt. Shows what passable but not great looks like, plus what to fix to push it to band 5.

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Write an Email Band 6

TOEFL Email Task — Band 6 (Research Topic)

Top-of-scale ceiling sample on a research-topic proposal prompt. Shows what differentiates band 5 from band 6.

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Write for an Academic Discussion Band 6

TOEFL Academic Discussion — Band 6 (Remote Work)

Top-of-scale Academic Discussion sample on the remote work / hybrid model debate. Shows the new-angle move that lifts a response from band 5 to band 6.

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Write for an Academic Discussion Band 5

TOEFL Academic Discussion — Band 5 (Social Media)

Academic Discussion sample on whether schools should restrict social media. Includes the rubric breakdown plus a demonstration of bringing a new angle.

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Write an Email Band 5

TOEFL Email Task — Band 5 (Roommate Issue)

Daily-life Email at band 5: a peer-to-peer reply on a shared-living dispute. Different register from the professor / TA samples, with a rubric breakdown.

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Write an Email Band 5

TOEFL Email Task — Band 5 (Internship Followup)

Professional-domain Email at band 5: an internship-followup reply that confirms continued interest and answers a clarifying question. Formal but warm register.

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Write for an Academic Discussion Band 5

TOEFL Academic Discussion — Band 5 (Climate Action)

Academic Discussion sample on whether universities should require a sustainability or climate-action course. Includes the new-angle move and a rubric breakdown.

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Write for an Academic Discussion Band 6

TOEFL Academic Discussion — Band 6 (Grading Reform)

Second Band 6 ceiling sample for direct triangulation: a pass/fail vs letter-grading debate. Pairs with the remote-work Band 6 sample.

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How to use these samples

Each sample is paired with a rubric-anchored breakdown showing why it earned its band on each criterion (organisation, development, language use, tone). Reading the band 3 sample first and then the band 5 on the same prompt is the fastest way to see what specifically separates the two: usually it is the addition of one concrete data point, one specific example, or one acknowledgment of a counter-argument. The vocabulary improvements between the two are real but usually less load-bearing than the structural ones.

The TOEFL 2026 Writing rubric in plain English

The official ETS TOEFL iBT 2026 Writing rubric scores each task on four criteria: organisation (clear structure, logical paragraph order), development (specific reasons, examples, evidence), language use (grammar accuracy, sentence variety, vocabulary range), and tone & register (appropriate formality for the audience). At band 5, all four criteria are at or near the ceiling. At band 3, organisation and tone are usually adequate but development is shallow and language use shows visible errors. The single most leveraged criterion to improve is development — specific named evidence anchored to the prompt earns far more points than smoother grammar at the same content level.

Practise on real TOEFL Writing tests

Reading samples accelerates pattern recognition. Writing your own responses, then having them scored against the same rubric, is what actually moves your band. Take a free TOEFL Writing practice test and submit your response for rubric-anchored expert evaluation. You'll receive a band score, the rationale behind it, and three concrete improvements you can apply on your next attempt.

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